Blake's Application for MPF

OOC

Steam Name:-XxAV3NGERxX

SteamID:-STEAM_0:0:46152710

Age:11 (sorry!)

How long have you been playing SlothGaming?:2-3 days

How long have you been roleplaying for?: A year,If you mean DarkRP and 1944RP,Clockwork,encountered it about a year ago,started playing it alot about a week ago

Why do you want to join the MPF?: CitizenRP gets boring.Besides,you get checked,forbidden from areas and have to obey the MPF's at ALL times. I want a little slice of my own leadership.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?: He wants City45 to become great,and wants the citizens to have some policing now and then. He wants to stop the endless imprisonment of "supposed" Rebels that are simply civilians trying to eek out a life in this dark new world,and wants a better life for himself,and the people.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No,sorry.

Have you ever been banned,if yes explain why?: Nope.

IC

Name: Blake Smith
Age:30
Sex:Male
Weight:Average
Height:Average

Character Backstory?: Blake was a pre-war pilot for British Airways. When the Resonance Cascade erupted from Black Mesa,He was in the air over the U.S. It was just a routine flight. Until he saw the clouds,with the alien ships whizzing out from the eerie blue glow in the middle. He announced what he saw. he prepared to land the plane at Washington Int. Airport,Until he realised that his main electrics and both of his engines were out. He managed to bring the plane to land in a field with his passengers alive. Then they walked towards the city...

Why do you want to join the MPF?: I want City45 to become great,a rival to the Capital City.
I want the citizens to be clothed and well fed,and the administration of the city never to get get corrupt. I eventually want the Administrator to turn off the Suppression Field,and let us have a shred of chance at becoming a "real city" with free will. I know it seems far off,but maybe the rebels will help,peacefully.Unlikely,but hey,what can you hope for when the world is being commandeered by an alien dictatorship? Well,atleast my fantasies about alien contact became true.

What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?: I hope to rise up the ranks,helping people peacefully,until we can hopefully sort something out between the Combine Advisors and the Adminstrators that brings us freewill,maybe a mutiny,if all else fails.

Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patrol
-Check Citizens
-Guard the Hardpoints
-Help other MPF members
-Listen to superiors.

Sorry for any muddled paragraphs or mistakes.
Avenger.

Wait wait, Wheres the Backstory part? Or am i just being a blind poop?

Backstory is below the character info,i should put a space there

There we go! Space has been added,should be easier to read now.

My first application, it feels like a real job application XD

(First of all, that's a triple post, onto the app though.
The backstory is terrible. (Saying Resonance Cascade isn't enough to count as HL2 lore, add the seven hour war, where he grew up etc.)
You'd probably notice if the electrics and engines were out if you were a pilot on a plane, I notice when the light on my speakers is off...
Cities in HL2 aren't "Rivals"
As a member of the MPF it isn't your job to make sure citizens are well fed and clothed, you give them the bare minimum to survive on.
The Administrator doesn't and can't turn of the suppression field.
The suppression field covers most of the Earth, not just one city.
The MPF do not, and will not support free will.
You imply you'll reach out to rebels for help.
You will never, EVER meet a combine advisor, and if you ever did (Which you wouldn't) you wouldn't dare mention free will.
A mutiny against the UU? 'Nuff said.

Incase you didn't gather, -support.

Awww My first App. I'll try to correct that.

Denied cuz triple post blud. Apply later when you have read the rules in USEFUL INFO section.