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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Fri May 10, 2013 3:50 am

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Post by Noliq on Fri May 10, 2013 4:06 am

CitizenRP gets boring

You are 11 Years old.

No previous experience

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Post by L30N on Fri May 10, 2013 4:29 am

The Resonance Cascade didn't happen at the same time, there was at least a year between them.
Proof read your backstory, too many mistakes in it.
You're just randomly throwing in commas now.. (The last three lines of your backstory)
The last part of your backstory should probably be at the start, rather than jumping back to his childhood from the events of 2002/3
The City Administrator doesn't really have an ability to become corrupted, no one can bribe him after all.
The MPF don't hope for rebel surrender, they hope for annihilation of their kind.
You basically badmouth the UU by saying "What can you hope for with the Earth being commandeered by an Alien dictatorship.
If you don't know you can just edit posts, and you aren't allowed to triple post, how do I know you'll be able to follow the many rules and regulations the MPF have.
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Post by Alexei on Fri May 10, 2013 8:25 am

I haven't read your application but I'm already going to say no solely because you lack confidence and put "probably gonna fail" in your title.

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