Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)

OOC

Steam Name:-XxAV3NGERxX

SteamID:-STEAM_0:0:46152710

Age:11 (sorry!)

How long have you been playing SlothGaming?:2-3 days

How long have you been roleplaying for?: A year, If you mean DarkRP and 1944RP, Clockwork, encountered it about a year ago, started playing it alot about a week ago.

Why do you want to join the MPF?: CitizenRP gets boring. Besides,you get checked, forbidden from areas and have to obey the MPF's at ALL times. I want a little slice of my own leadership.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?: He wants City45 to become great, and wants the citizens to have some policing now and then. He wants to stop the rebels from taking over the city, as he thinks that will lead to more battles and bloodshed in the future.He also wants a better life for himself.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No,sorry.

Have you ever been banned,if yes explain why?: Nope.

IC

Name: Blake Smith
Age:30
Sex:Male
Weight:Average
Height:Average

Character Backstory?: Blake was a pre-war pilot for British Airways. When the Resonance Cascade erupted from Black Mesa,He was in the air over the U.S. Not knowing that the Seven Hour War had began. It was just a routine flight. Until he saw the portal clouds,with the alien ships whizzing out from the eerie blue glow in the middle. He announced what he saw by voice,as his electrics had faltered and failed. he prepared to land the plane at Washington Int. Airport,until his engines also failed. He managed to bring the plane to land in a field with his passengers alive. Then they walked towards the city... Blake grew up in Shrewsbury,a town in England,Where the famous discoverer of evolution was born,Charles Darwin. It was a nice town,with a good park, nice community and low crime.

Why do you want to join the MPF?: I want City45 to become great,and to stop the influx of rebel activity in this sector.
I want the citizens to be disciplined,and the administration of the city never to get corrupted. I eventually want the Administrator to expand the city, let us have a shred of chance at becoming a "real city" again. I know it seems far off, but maybe the rebels in this city will surrender? Unlikely, but hey, what can you hope for when the world is being commandeered by an alien dictatorship? Well, at least my fantasies about alien contact became true.

What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?: I hope to rise up the ranks, helping the combine achieve greatness in City45, and to eek out a life for myself in this city, under Combine rule.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patrol
-Check Citizens
-Guard the Hardpoints
-Help other MPF members
-Listen to superiors.

Sorry for any mistakes in lore (Again!)Since this is my now second post.
Yours sincerely,
Avenger.


(Hope this is good bro's.)

Neutral Good player but awfully short

My fail,I forgot to upload the updated one i will copy and paste it from hte document i was writing on out of the forums.

OOC

Steam Name:-XxAV3NGERxX

SteamID:-STEAM_0:0:46152710

Age:11 (sorry!)

How long have you been playing SlothGaming?:2-3 days

How long have you been roleplaying for?: A year, If you mean DarkRP and 1944RP, Clockwork,well I encountered it about a year ago, started playing it alot about a week ago.

Why do you want to join the MPF?: CitizenRP is ssometimes pretty without action. Obviously. Besides,you get checked and forbidden from areas when you also have to obey the MPF's at ALL times. I want a little slice of my own leadership.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?: He wants City45 to become great, and wants the citizens to have some good,fresh annihilation of the Rebels. He wants to stop the rebels from doing anymore damage to the city as he thinks that will lead to more battles and bloodshed in the future.He also wants a better life conditions for himself.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No,sorry.

Have you ever been banned,if yes explain why?: Nope.

IC

Name: Blake Smith
Age:30
Sex:Male
Weight:Average
Height:Average

Character Backstory?:Blake was born and also grew up in Shrewsbury, a town in England, Where the famous discoverer of evolution was born, Charles Darwin. It was a nice town with a good park a nice community and low crime. Blake was a pre-war pilot for British Airways. When the Portal Storms erupted from the sky, He was in the air over the US, not knowing that the Seven Hour War had just begun. It was just a routine flight. Until he saw the portal clouds,with the alien ships whizzing out from the eerie blue glow in the middle. He announced what he saw by voice,to the passengers, as his electrics had faltered and failed,the cause was unknown,but the crew at the time suspected it for just a long service history with BA. As they heard some loud vibration from engine 1 (left) and also black smoke pouring from the outtake. he prepared to land the plane at Washington Int. Airport,until engine 2 (right) also failed,he thought "What a co-incidence!" but he managed to bring the plane to crash-land in a field with all of his passengers somehow alive. Then they walked towards Washington,shuddering from the experience. So was Blake.

Why do you want to join the MPF?: I want City45 to become great,and to kill off the rebel activity in this city.
I want the citizens to be disciplined,and the city to never get riddled with resistance and Anti-Citizens. I eventually want the Rebels to be killed off. know it seems far off, but maybe the rebels in this city WILL all be killed off? very unlikely but hey.

What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?: I hope to rise up the ranks, helping the combine achieve greatness in City45, and to eek out a life for myself in this city, under Combine rule.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patrol
-Check Citizens
-Guard the Hardpoints if needed to
-Help other MPF members
-Listen to superiors.

Sorry for any mistakes in lore or other things,such as grammar. (Again!)Since this is my now second post,and final draft. Just a question,do you think this is very professional coming from an 11 year old?
Yours sincerely,
Avenger.

CitizenRP gets boring

You are 11 Years old.

No previous experience

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I'll edit this. Thanks for the constructive critisism. A bit disheartened,but who cares. *Edited*

I haven't read your application but I'm already going to say no solely because you lack confidence and put "probably gonna fail" in your title.