Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)
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Re: Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)
Neutral Good player but awfully short
Re: Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)
CitizenRP gets boring
You are 11 Years old.
No previous experience
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Noliq- Member
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Join date : 2013-04-07
Age : 28
Location : Denmark
Re: Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)
The Resonance Cascade didn't happen at the same time, there was at least a year between them.
Proof read your backstory, too many mistakes in it.
You're just randomly throwing in commas now.. (The last three lines of your backstory)
The last part of your backstory should probably be at the start, rather than jumping back to his childhood from the events of 2002/3
The City Administrator doesn't really have an ability to become corrupted, no one can bribe him after all.
The MPF don't hope for rebel surrender, they hope for annihilation of their kind.
You basically badmouth the UU by saying "What can you hope for with the Earth being commandeered by an Alien dictatorship.
If you don't know you can just edit posts, and you aren't allowed to triple post, how do I know you'll be able to follow the many rules and regulations the MPF have.
-Support.
Proof read your backstory, too many mistakes in it.
You're just randomly throwing in commas now.. (The last three lines of your backstory)
The last part of your backstory should probably be at the start, rather than jumping back to his childhood from the events of 2002/3
The City Administrator doesn't really have an ability to become corrupted, no one can bribe him after all.
The MPF don't hope for rebel surrender, they hope for annihilation of their kind.
You basically badmouth the UU by saying "What can you hope for with the Earth being commandeered by an Alien dictatorship.
If you don't know you can just edit posts, and you aren't allowed to triple post, how do I know you'll be able to follow the many rules and regulations the MPF have.
-Support.
L30N- Member
- Posts : 133
Join date : 2013-04-09
Re: Blake's now second application for the MPF. (Expect nothing,this one probably fails also.)
I haven't read your application but I'm already going to say no solely because you lack confidence and put "probably gonna fail" in your title.
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