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Post by CookieMasterz on Fri May 10, 2013 6:55 am

First off, Lemmie just say, I KNOW the diffrence between OOC and IC :c. Its just that while i was letting the story flow through my head i forgot that i was typing in IC and accidently wrote it in OOC form. So once Leon mentioned it, I saw my silly mistake and quickly fixed it.

Also never knew second chances were allowed.

OOC:

Steam name: CookieMasterz
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:24410537
Age: 14
How long have you been playing SlothGaming?: About 4-5 Days.
How long have you been roleplaying for?: A year, Maybe a bit more.
Why do you want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): Well there are multiple reasons why i want to join the MPF. One of them is because as a citizen, I honestly cant really do much, Im pretty limited on options and restricted to certain areas. And You cant really make THAT much rp as a citizen, Since most shops are either closed or some areas are completely off-limits to citizens. Also it just seems like plain fun to be in the MPF.
Why does your character want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): He used to be a Police Officer before the Seven hour war, And he thinks that the rebels are completely ruining the lives of the citizens, By killing our protectors and destroying civilized societys. Since he thinks so badly about rebels, He would like to join the MPF.
Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No
Have you ever been banned, if yes explain why?: Never been banned.

IC:
Name: Randolf Himmer
Age: 33
Sex: Male
Weight: 180 Pounds
Height: 5 Feet 9 Inches
Why do you want to join the MPF?(2 paragraphs): Randolf would like to join the MPF Because he believes the rebellion is just trying to destroy the life of the people. Many people are upset about the sudden change of command here on planet earth, But Randolf understands that nothing could be done, And that people have to accept the fate earth has fallen into. The rebels are doing nothing to help the humans, They are just destorying our only protectors from the Xen wildlife that has invaded Earth. Even if we did get rid of the combine, Earth would never be the same again. Along with being a supporter of the MPF, He was also a Police officer before the seven hour war, So he has some experience of being an authority figure.
What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?(1 - 3 paragraphs):
Randolf hopes to achieve multiple things, One of them is the downfall of the rebellion. He has despised them through all his years living in City 18, And now that he gets an opportunity to punish them, He will gladly take it. Randolf also hopes to see the world as a more civilized society, But he has noticed some corrupt MPF Officers punishing citizens for no reason, He will try to correct those rights and not follow the same path they have.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
- Patrol
- Train
- Follow Orders from Officers
- Watch over the citizens
- Guard the Hardpoints if needed.
Character backstory(2 - 4 paragraphs):
I Work as a Police Officer for the Berlin Police Station, I often respond to firefights and hostage situations. Everything was going smooth for Me until one day I was called on a Hostage situation, It was a terrorist group holding a CEO for a major company hostage, The terrorists threathened to blow up the building and the surrounding plaza, As my team ascended to the rooftops to meet him, The building exploded and the surrounding plaza shook from the explosion. I woke up hours later in an ambulance. They told him that he was lucky to survive, As the TNT wasnt strong enough to completely destroy the building, but sections of it were completely destroyed. As I was rushed to the hospital, I went unconscious from the shock and loss of blood. A few days later I had finally woke up from his disastrous incident and the nurses were treating Me.

Then about 3 months later, I was receiving my daily dose of vitamin pills, But then the entire building shook and crumbled, The power went on and off mutiple times and I heard screams of other patients and doctors as they were horrified of the sudden change in events. The nurses took him outside to escort him to a safer place, But then I witnessed the horrible events unfold. I saw Combine spaceships flying over Berlin and dropping down bombs that shook entire blocks, Apaches and Jets were taken out of the sky like flies, The nurses stood horrified at what was happening, Then I saw some combine Soldiers shoot an officer in the head and walk away like nothing happened. The nurses called 911 but there was no answer. As I was being escorted to one of the military hideouts, I saw a Combine soldier shoot the nurses that were escorting him, And then I was knocked unconscious. After I woke from My coma, The combine asked me to choose, Be amputated painfully and slowly, Or live in the hell of a city called City 18, I chose City 18, Once I got there I noticed how horrible it was, Rebels attacking a defenseless MPF officer, And much more unmentionable things. After a few more months of living in this hellhole of a place called City 18. I wanted some change, So I applied for the MPF and awaited their final decision

Note: The backstory and some other stuff is the same because well, No one really criticized it after leon, So ill just assume that most of the mistakes i did at first were patched up.
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Post by Grammar Nazi on Fri May 10, 2013 1:18 pm

+1, Effort has been put into this, I've seen him on the server.

Note: Since you're new to the MPF, if you get accepted I strongly recommend reading these guides, they will help you not fail as an MPF.

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t36-the-cpu-guide-to-divisions-and-ranks

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t49-the-cpu-equipment-guide

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t48-the-cpu-guide-to-mark-citizens

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t186-mpf-fearrp-guide

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Post by Cypher on Fri May 10, 2013 1:24 pm

+1, good App

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Post by Noliq on Fri May 10, 2013 11:53 pm

Oyster wrote:+1, Effort has been put into this, I've seen him on the server.

Note: Since you're new to the MPF, if you get accepted I strongly recommend reading these guides, they will help you not fail as an MPF.

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t36-the-cpu-guide-to-divisions-and-ranks

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t49-the-cpu-equipment-guide

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t48-the-cpu-guide-to-mark-citizens

https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t186-mpf-fearrp-guide
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Post by CookieMasterz on Sat May 11, 2013 7:00 am

Needs a bit more posts. Been almost a day. Sad
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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Sat May 11, 2013 7:30 am

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