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Post by CallMeRichardBeach on Tue May 14, 2013 7:55 am

Steam name: GoldenFooX


SteamID: STEAM_0:1:48445785


How long have you been playing SlothGaming?: 3-4 days idc about my playtime cause a great dvl told me once, It doesnt matter how much time you play.


How long have you been serious RP'ing?: A little over 8 months


Tell me a basic 4 line paragraph about the story of HL2:
Gordon Freeman was brought out of Stasis put into a train into city 17 by G-man, when he gets caught by CP's and Barney, undercover friend saves him, he makes his way to klieners lab after a failed teleportation attempt, gets his HEV suit and crowbar, there he battles through the canals, getting an airboat and battling to Black Mesa East, when he arrives at Black Mesa east, it comes under attack by the combine and Gordon goes through zombie-infested Ravenholm to Nova Prospekt. When he escapes Ravenholm, he is given a dune buggy to go to Nova Prospekt, he gains bugbait along the way, when he got to nova prospekt, he freed Eli and used the combine teleporter to get back to klieners lab, then Gordon assists in taking over the city by destroying the Portal reactor which powered down the entire citadel.


How are Vortigaunts envolved in HL2?: (Might be a bit rusty, never payed much attention to vortigaunts in the game) Vortigaunts are a race from Xen, that was enslaved by the combine, they got to earth by a portal rip. They help The Resistance and anyone who resists the combine. They are frequently enslaved as they have escaped from their home planet.


Do a little RP with /me's of what a Vortigaunt does:

*** Rebel: Vortigaunt, take care of the injured!

*** Vort: This one is taking care.

*** OTA: /me Slides against the wall, Ducking out of cover, aiming at the rebel and pulling the trigger

*** Vort: /me Growls at the OTA while backing off

*** 4 OTA units Surround the Vortigaunt, capturing him

*** Vort: /me Growls and attempts to break free from their capture however the OTA's are too strong for the Vort.

*** Vort: /me Moans as he is being dragged off.

*** (Vort is Enslaved)

*** CP watching the Vort Sweep the plaza

*** Vort /me Finished sweeping the sidewalk then Walks up to the CP nervously, saying "This one is finished sweeping the sidewalk"

*** <::Pick up the leave from the park

*** Vort /me Nods slightly and walks slowly to the park

*** (Vort is finished)

*** Vort: This one is finished.

*** <:: Good work, get back into the nexus



Vortigaunt start type: Enslaved/Freed (You may get captured though fairly fast as you really don't start with any help but one or two tips from a Admin)

EDIT - Changed the HL2 Story, a liiiiiiiiiiitttttttleeeeeeeeeee long.


Last edited by CallMeRichardBeach on Wed May 15, 2013 11:41 am; edited 2 times in total

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Wed May 15, 2013 7:36 am


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Wait,whut? The Hl2 storyline is badly described and un-accurate, I think Black Mesa was destroyed or something. Some grammatical errors.

Summing this up, Not enough effort put into this application and certainly not enough research into this was made.

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Post by CallMeRichardBeach on Wed May 15, 2013 10:04 am

I forgot to mention that i havent played HL2 in a long time, might have to do a re-play soon

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Wed May 15, 2013 10:07 am

This is a good site for you to refresh your memory:

http://sectorw.wikia.com/wiki/Half-Life_2

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Post by CookieMasterz on Wed May 15, 2013 10:25 am

I Understand if you skipped a lot of details in the basic summary, But that was -1 Material. Sowwy richard.
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Post by Ghost Prodigy on Wed May 15, 2013 10:26 am

Neutral,sorry but the background on HL2 is inaccurate.

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Post by CallMeRichardBeach on Wed May 15, 2013 11:42 am

Changed Story, should be better now, its a little long...

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Post by Ian on Wed May 15, 2013 2:04 pm

It is better, but still very poorly written, and lacks better detail. But as you have fixed it somewhat, +Support, the rest of the app is fine, and your edited storyline is better, but I would really put more effort into it.

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Post by Cypher on Wed May 15, 2013 2:32 pm

Neutral. Sorry but the effort wasn't here in the first place.

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Post by Vendetta on Wed May 15, 2013 5:26 pm

Oyster wrote:
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Wait,whut? The Hl2 storyline is badly described and un-accurate, I think Black Mesa was destroyed or something. Some grammatical errors.

Summing this up, Not enough effort put into this application and certainly not enough research into this was made.

Yeah Black mesa is basically a fucking crater, at least the portion of it that was up at the surface.
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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Wed May 15, 2013 6:33 pm

Denied I think to many already casted their vote when you edited feel free to repost it
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