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Post by TheVelocity on Sun May 19, 2013 10:03 am

Check Out my new one... https://squidgaming.forumotion.co.uk/t381-velocity-s-new-mpf-application




Steam name:Velocity
Profile name: jamesfx12
SteamID:STEAM_0:0:52795215
Age:12 (13 24th May(Don't let my age judge you))
How long have you been playing SlothGaming?: 3-4 weeks
How long have you been roleplaying for?:2 years.
Why do you want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph):Because I believe I could be a real asset to the team/force and I believe I could bring skills to the team Like Team work, Leadership and lots more. I also Can be fair when need I need to be but strict when I need to be.
Why does your character want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph):Because he has always been inspired by these cops, respected them and always will. He would like to be a part of this because He would like to be respected and wants to show the community that not all MPF's are very strict.
Do you have any previous MPF experience?: Unfortunately I do not.
Have you ever been banned, if yes explain why?:No.

IC:

Name:James Archer
Age:20
Sex:Male (M)
Weight: 124
Height:1'43
Why do you want to join the MPF?(2 paragraphs): I believe I will provide the team with a few more skills and give my team the boost they need to carry on going. I want to join because i feel like I could provide a lot for the team, and they could provide a lot for me.
I want to join so I can ensure that my family and friends are safe and so that I know that My city is safe with me protecting them.
What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?(1 - 3 paragraphs):In the team I hope to get more skills, have new experiences;learn new things every day. I hope in the team I put up some skills for my personality like self discipline and self confidence. I also hope to learn new things like New experiences; Different call-outs and more.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patrol
-Protect the Slums
-Protect the Civilian
-Prevent Crime/Anti-Civilian Activities
-Disciplining the Civilians so they don't do wrong again
Character backstory(2 - 4 paragraphs):James Is man who likes to keep to himself he doesn't like being back chatted about or being humiliated in public. He is a stealthy type of person, hardly ever talks but likes to listen. He won't interfere unless he is asked.
His family was poor, he lived in a shed with 3 other brothers. His farther died when he was 3, His mother died of suffocation when he was 6. His 3 Brothers have never been seen since the day his mother died.
He went to a poor low wealth school until he was 15, he had to drop out as he couldn't afford it. He never had any friends because everyone thought he was a stig, This is why he kept to himself. In school he learnt a lot and didn't like it when he had to miss class because he was ill. He spent most his life in school. He tried not to leave because he had no home to go to.
He hardly had any money. When he wanted a job employees would turn him down because of what he looked like. When he was 18 he got a job as a superstore cleaner, He never got paid much but at least he was getting paid. He did this job 24/7, He stayed in a bit next to the shop and waited for it to open and then close. When he was 19 he got enough money to buy a home. He chose city 45 and that's where he is today!


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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Sun May 19, 2013 10:05 am

2 - 4 Paragraphs Whats so hard about it?
Also didn't give you permission "ex - war man"
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Post by TheVelocity on Sun May 19, 2013 10:05 am

Sorry I will change it.

It will be fixed by tomorrow my friend.

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Post by SentimentalBadger on Sun May 19, 2013 7:41 pm

-1, bad application in general.

"9.45 lbs"...what, is he a fish?

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Post by TheVelocity on Sun May 19, 2013 9:06 pm

SentimentalBadger wrote:-1, bad application in general.

"9.45 lbs"...what, is he a fish?
Sorry Got a bit confused, It's fixed now.

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Post by CookieMasterz on Sun May 19, 2013 10:13 pm

His weight cant be 216, He is malnorished. Do 125 Or something.
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Post by TheVelocity on Sun May 19, 2013 11:44 pm

CookieMasterz wrote:His weight cant be 216, He is malnorished. Do 125 Or something.

Thanks

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Mon May 20, 2013 9:57 am

Lock this since he made a new app?(Idk how to lock posts)

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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 4:14 pm

Oyster wrote:Lock this since he made a new app?(Idk how to lock posts)

Yer I don't know how to lock.

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