MPF Application Niebiański

OOC

Steam name: wolfi0
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:18991367
Age: 15
How long have you been playing SlothGaming?: a week
How long have you been roleplaying for?: 3-4 years
Why do you want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): Has been played citizen enough time, now, my wanted dream is being in MPF.
Why does your character want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): My character is really mature, he hate anti-citizens and like sending judgement when ever he come.
Do you have any previous MPF experience?: Yeah, i have actually MPF and had OTA on another server
Have you ever been banned, if yes explain why?: Nope.

IC:

Name: Alexander Graham
Age: 56 years old
Sex: Male
Weight: 72 kg
Height: 1,8 metre
Why do you want to join the MPF?(2 paragraphs): I want keep streets in harmony and order. After joing to the MPF force i think everything will be changed.
What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?(1 - 3 paragraphs): I hope, i could rise from the ground this city, from rapists, murderers, muggers, kidnappers etc. Also like helping citizens in opening from time to time rations, so they would have some tokens and supplements.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patroling streets
-Making rations
-Executing citizens in detainment
-Helping innocents citizens from robbing, mugging
-Finding contraband items
Character backstory(2 - 4 paragraphs):Alexander Graham lived in city 8, with his wife and 11 years old daughter. In random day, when he reading newspaper, his home has been burgler by 3 rebels. They wanted money and food, Alexander took problems in his hands and attempted to grab gun from his wardrobe but... He were stuned by one of rebels using his baseball bat. When Alexander awaken, he seen dead wife and son, after this he blacked out. He again awaken but in hospital, he cant belived in one day he lost everything... So he moved out to the city 45. First day in new city and he was angry, he just seen anti-citizens assaulting MPF. Now he attempted to get to the MPF force and kill every rebels.

-1, Too many grammatical errors for me to even point out,

THE APP IS TOO SHORT!