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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 3:18 am

OOC

Steam name:Velocity
Profile Name: jamesfx12
SteamID:STEAM_0:0:52795215
Age:12 (13, 24th May.)
How long have you been playing SlothGaming?:2-3 Weeks.
How long have you been roleplaying for?:I have been role-Playing for 2 years!
Why do you want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph):I want to join because I believe I can keep the streets of city 45 safe and the citizens from rebels/Anti-civilians. I could provide the MPF with some key essential skills like problems solving and team work.
Why does your character want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph):James wants to make a difference to the city he lives in, He doesn't want crime. He wants to keep his city's streets clean and make sure the citizens are safe and follow the basic guidelines. The streets are full of crime these days and unlike some people he wants to reduce this number and had peace at last in this once great, Crime-free, City.
Do you have any previous MPF experience?: Unfortunately I do not.
Have you ever been banned, if yes explain why?: Thankfully I have not.

IC:

Name: James Archer
Age:20
Sex: Male
Weight:124
Height:1"5
Why do you want to join the MPF?(2 paragraphs):I wish to join because I believe that the streets of city 45 are crawling with criminals and crime. Since I have lived in this city for one year now I believe I know the weak points and strong points of the city and What needs improving. I want the citizens to feel safe when they walk out of there homes, In this and past generations when civilians have walked out their doors they don't feel safe they have to peek around corners and look around before they leave.
I also want to join to protect the nexus and stop citizens doing things that might effect their health. For example going into the slums might be a bad idea because nobody knows what is down there and the rebel base is deep in the slums. If you citizens reach this base the rebels may tell them things which are not necessarily true, This could lead them to believe we are doing bad and we are the bad guys.
What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?(1 - 3 paragraphs): In the MPF I hope to gain a lot of skills and learn important life skills. I also want to feel proud in my self and what I have done, Like ensuring the citizens are safe and feel proud of my city in general.
I want to achieve essential skills like team work and socializing skills. If I achieve all of these things I think when and If I leave the MPF I will have gained irreplaceable skills for like, for future jobs and pass these skills onto somebody else. Then I will know I have done what I have been Intended to do and teach others the way I have been taught so in generations people of the future will know what type of skills we had and what type of people we were.
Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day?:
-Patrol
-Protect Civilians
-Guard the Slums
-Prevent Anti-Civilian activities
-Train (If high enough Rank)
Character backstory(2 - 4 paragraphs):James was born on the 24th of May 1991. He lived with his parents and 2 other brothers in a small but stable town called UpHolland. When he was just 4 his mum died of suffocation after being trapped in a fallen down factory. His dad had to support him but his dad couldn't cope so he gave his other 2 children to a children home which left James a lonely child.
He was home schooled as his dad couldn't afford for him to go to school. He learnt a lot of his dad as his dad was a well taught man. He also learnt a few more things that normal school boys and girls wouldn't have learnt. When he was 13 he got a Saturday job which meant he could go to school and afford most things he couldn't afford before. At the age of 16 he met a girl name Sophie. He was with her until he was 18 when he proposed to her and to his shock she said yes.
When James was 20 he moved to city 12 to live a well deserved life as a business man for the city 12 CWU. After 4 months of living in city 12 he was chased out by debt as he didn't pay taxes. Him and Sophie then moved to city 40 which was what they always dreamed about but they soon found out about the city's major crime problem. They finally moved to city 45 where they remain today.


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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 5:35 am

I need votes please people Smile 40 views and still 0 replies Sad

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Post by CookieMasterz on Mon May 20, 2013 5:51 am

Havent seen your RP, Backstory isnt THAT long, But a decent size.

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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 5:55 am

CookieMasterz wrote: Havent seen your RP, Backstory isnt THAT long, But a decent size.

Neutral.

I am sure you have, I remember talking to you??

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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 6:09 am

Thanks for so many views


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Post by L30N on Mon May 20, 2013 6:11 am

TheVelocity wrote:Please vote people Smile
Please stop double posting? I'll vote later.

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Post by TheVelocity on Mon May 20, 2013 6:12 am

L30N wrote:
TheVelocity wrote:Please vote people Smile
Please stop double posting? I'll vote later.

Sorry I will delete them

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Wed May 22, 2013 1:25 am

+1, Good Application, some grammatical errors; but I'll let them slide because of your age.

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Post by Igor The Sloth on Wed May 22, 2013 1:45 am

Neutral as I got no clue how he RPs

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Post by L30N on Wed May 22, 2013 2:21 am


Never seen your rp
He's only 1.5 (to one decimal point) feet tall... Fix that.
If he is twenty he'd have been born in 1996
He would have been about four years old when the combine invade, change either his age or back story accordingly.
No mention of hl2 lore (Nothing on the seven hour war, resonance cascade or Portal storms)
Bad grammar.
You've shown you're unable to follow basic rules (don't double post).
In case you hadn't guessed, -Support.

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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Wed May 22, 2013 2:45 am

Denied.
Reapply when you fix the application
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