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Post by Rex^^ on Mon May 20, 2013 10:26 am

Steam name: Rex^^
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:45136652
Age: 15
How long have you been playing SlothGaming?: 4 Days
How long have you been roleplaying for?: 2 Weeks
Why do you want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): I have been playing HL2RP for 2 weeks now and I'm really enjoying it, however I'm bored of Roleplaying as a citizen and since I have always wanted to be a MPF I have decided to apply again. Being a MPF would be a new experience to me so I will try my best to RP properly and do my best to defend the City.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?(1 paragraph): Mary had always admired the MPF, she would aid them in battle and try to help them by reporting Anti-Citizen activity, she had always admired the MPF and she thinks the time has come to become one of them, to help the city and protect the civilized society, she is ready to become a MPF and send her application.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No, I have never been a MPF Before

Have you ever been banned, if yes explain why?: Nope, not planning to.

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Name: Mary Backery
Age: 34
Sex: Female
Weight: 140 lbs
Height: 5'6
Why do you want to join the MPF?(2 paragraphs): Ever since I have been in C45 I have always feel safe around the MPF, I have admired them for their abilities and always tried to help them Every time I can. I have never broke a single rule and I always abide by them.

Since the MPF are always willing to help me I have decided to become one of them so I can defend the City, even if I risk my life in the process. I will always try to defend my fellow MPF Officers and follow the orders of the higher ranks and their advices, so I can improve and become a better Unit.

What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?(1 - 3 paragraphs): I want to clear the City and make it more civilized, I have seen countless times people breaking the law and i want that to change, so if I get to be a MPF I will make try my best to make this city more organized so the civilized society can live in peace in our Beautiful city.

Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day:
- Search for illegal contraband
- Give Loyalist Points
- Patrol the Plaza.
- Give rations to the citizens.
- Protect the civilized society.

Character backstory (2 - 4 paragraphs): During Mary's life, she has achieved many different things. Many of these achievements making her a force to be reckoned with. Not only because of her tactical aptitude, but because of the fact that in her life she has been able to reach all of her goals that she had set for herself. She is an intelligent individual that knows whenever she needs to act, or keep to herself

Mary grew up in the Detroit michigan area, and is very closely related to a person named " Ryan Baker". In fact, these two were very close friends. During Mary's life, she made the best grades out of everyone she knew. During her Senior year of high school, she was elected class valadictorian Because of the achievements that she had earned. But after high school, she attended college at the Harvard university of Medical Science. There, she still carried on to pass all of her classes with flying colors.

After college, Mary moved on to become a MSL, Also known as a Medical Science Liaison. This meant that she was able to determine the cause of various different types of diseases, and help to cure things such as Polio, and Cancer. But still, there is no cure for cancer. Anyhow, Mary studied in the therapeutic field, Dealing with pain management, oncology, metabolism and cardio.

Mary was also raised in a millitary based household. She lived in the nicest house on her block. Her dad, Jackson Bakery, was a Second lieutenant in the U.S. Navy Seals. Her father had such high expectations of her that if she did not meet these different demands, she would recieve harsh punishments at home. Her home life was sickening and diluded, and even sour sweet. While her life was so good and she could get whatever she wanted, her life was filled with Physical violence from her father, and alot of Vocal confrontation from her mother.

During the seven hour war though, alot changed. Mary lost most of her family during the war and it came down to her struggling to survive with her close friend, Ryan baker. During the war, they did everything to survive together.


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Post by Cypher on Mon May 20, 2013 10:48 am

Age is incorrect for your story. Neutral. Fix the age and I'll +

(2016 is current year. Invasion in 2000-2003 era)


+1 now, you fixed it you poo

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Tue May 21, 2013 6:37 am

Neutral, Fix your grammatical errors, you've missed punctuations, capital letters where they aren't needed.

Errors:

Being a MPF... = Being enlisted in the MPF...

I have always feel... = I have always felt....

I want to clear the City... = I want to clean the City...

I have decided to become one of them... = I've decided to apply for the MPF...


And several other grammatical errors.

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Post by CookieMasterz on Tue May 21, 2013 6:41 am

Honestly never seen you in-game.

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Post by Rex^^ on Tue May 21, 2013 7:37 am

Sorry for my grammatical errors, English isn’t my first language so I will try to fix them.

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Post by Vendetta on Tue May 21, 2013 8:22 am

Alright, here I go.

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+1

Because I've seen your roleplay and going back on what Sloth said, yeah, you could teach the fail CP a thing or two.
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Post by Sinskitz on Wed May 22, 2013 4:35 am


Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No, I have never been a MPF Before

I don't like it that you have never been a Metro police force officer before, but you have to learn somewhere. + 1

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Post by Grammar Nazi on Thu May 23, 2013 8:33 am

People, vote on this.

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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Thu May 23, 2013 8:37 am

-1 Never seen you ingame
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Post by Grammar Nazi on Thu May 23, 2013 8:54 am

Sloth the Wizard wrote:-1 Never seen you ingame

You already voted.

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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Thu May 23, 2013 8:57 am

Grammar Nazi wrote:
Sloth the Wizard wrote:-1 Never seen you ingame

You already voted.

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Post by Rex^^ on Thu May 23, 2013 9:57 am

Sloth the Wizard wrote:
Grammar Nazi wrote:
Sloth the Wizard wrote:-1 Never seen you ingame

You already voted.

Nein

But... You did D:

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Post by Korean Guy on Thu May 23, 2013 11:38 am

Neutral. Application is nice, but never seen you in game

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Connor Reese: An old CWU worker who doesn't have much of a significance in the city.

Mihn-Thi Luong: A young, Japanese woman who has been loyal to the Combine for extra food.

CpU.C--.JUDGE-03.78391: Japanese MPF who goes by the name of Kiyomi, and is quite handy with a handgun.
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Post by JPlus on Thu May 23, 2013 5:57 pm

Neutral, for reasons similar to all other neutral posts on this application. Maybe play for a week or two with a high amount of activity before applying again, or wait until the apocalypse and I'm sure War will be able to let you apply ICly (he's a CmD, if you didn't know).

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Robert Maine [Citizen - HL2RP] - Ran in said firefight with unconscious wife in arms.
C45/C18.MpF.ZONE-05.41222 [MPF - HL2RP] - Tired of never getting noticed, quit his job.
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Post by rapzeh76 on Thu May 23, 2013 6:04 pm

+support

Great Application....

Never seen you in-game.....

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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Thu May 23, 2013 8:08 pm

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