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Post by Gnomelord69 on Sun Jun 23, 2013 7:33 am

Steam name: tylerabc123


SteamID: STEAM_0:1:41464395 (http://steamidfinder.com/)



Age: 13 


How long have you been playing on our sever, SlothGaming?: A lfew months, 'bout 3.


How long have you been role-playing for?: A year and a half.



Why do you want to join the Police Force?(1 paragraph): So I can add some variety to my rp on the server. There isn't much to do as a citizen besides break the law, so I wanted to change, AND ENFORCE IT, instead.



Why does your character want to join the Police Force?(1 paragraph): He is young and interested in growing up in the police force, making money to live on his own, and keep the city safe. He once saw a man get mugged, then the man kill himself because he got mugged. He wants to stop this from happening.



Do you have any previous experience in the Police Force?: Nope, Chuck Testa.



Have you ever been banned ,if yes, explain why?: Chuck. Testa. (Nope)

IC:

Name: Jeffery Flint
Age: 18
Sex: Male
Weight: 120 lbs
Height: 5'7
Why do you want to join the Police Force?(2 paragraphs): I want to join the force because I want to stop the city from being corrupt. I wish to save people from criminals, and enforce justice on the streets of terror. I want to help keep the city safe for youngsters and others who wish to just live a normal life!



I will save people in need, and help protect them from harm of all sorts. I will be on guard at ALL times, turning in criminals and not be an officer who does drugs and other things like stealing from the station. I want to help this city become the best it can be.


What do you hope to achieve in the Police Force?(1 - 3 paragraphs): I hope to achieve the glorious status of a hero. I hope to achieve a medal for saving lives. I hope to achieve nothing but pride and glory. I want to achieve me being a better person, helping the criminals become better as well.
Name 5 things a Police unit does every day:
- Patrol the city
- Gear up
- Listen to a higher rank
- Be strict with his duties
- Check his equipment before he leaves

Questionnaire:

1. If you found a illegal weapon what would you do?

I would take it, bring it back to the station, and report it.


2. What would you do if you caught two Citizens fist fighting?
I would break it up, and depending on their record, let them off with a warning or arrest them.



3. If a fellow Police unit has Illegal goods such as drugs ect what would you do?
Report him/her immediately. Do not even make contact with them.


4. If you just witnessed a murder what would you do?
Call for backup, write down what the criminal looks like, and call a detective to identify the body.


5. You have just found a person passed out on the ground what would you do?
Check for vital signs, call for an ambulance, keep them alive until help arrives.


6. Should you disobey a higher ranks orders explain why you would need to?
Never. Unless in absolute emergencies, I would still explain for what I have done.

Character's backstory(2 - 4 paragraphs):



I was born in Ohio, my family moved from place to place, I have never seen violence. Everywhere we went was so safe. Then, I left the house. I moved into this city, and I was thinking about robbing someone for money. It was a hard decision. When I was thinking about it, I  saw a man get mugged and killed. I was horrified. Then, I changed to the side of the law.


Living in all these places made me very adapting. I was born on a farm, moved to a small town, then to a city, then too another small town. Then, to the big city. I learned to get used to my surroundings, I can adapt to almost any eviorment. I did a lot of exercise, because my family couldn't afford gas, much less a car. They had to sell it. I rode a crappy old bike everywhere, and I hadn't made much friends.
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Post by Ian on Sun Jun 23, 2013 2:39 pm

Your application is good until the backstory, its kinda mixed up, and theres a lot of info thats not really even needed. But because the rest is okay, +0.5.

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Post by RisingApocolapse on Mon Jun 24, 2013 4:41 am

Agree with Ian, pretty good, but the backstory and not giving one paragraph, i'm acutally going to change mine to a -1


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Post by Cypher on Mon Jun 24, 2013 3:29 pm

Too young IMO. Neutral.

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Post by JPlus on Tue Jun 25, 2013 9:14 am

+0.5
All reasons above.

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Post by Noliq on Tue Jun 25, 2013 7:57 pm

Neutral

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