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Post by Captchas12 on Sat May 11, 2013 11:05 am

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Steam Name: FACETIME

Steam ID: 1:37738344

Age:14

How long have you been playing Sloth Gaming?: About 1 year.

How long have you been roleplaying for?: About 3 years.

Why do you want to join the MPF?:
I want to join the MPF because I like the more serious
roleplay elements and authority they have. They are a crucial role to HL2RP, because without them, there would be chaos in the streets. Also, I have been playing Sloth Gaming for about 1 year, so it would make partial sense to apply. Those are the main reasons I want to join the MPF.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?:

My character wants to join the MPF because he is a loyalist. He has a good amount of Loyalist points (15). Also, he reported on a good amount of crimes. He is also pretty fit, so he is will take less to recover from the undernourishment. He will make a pretty good MPF.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No.

Have you ever been banned, if yes, explain why?: No.

IC:

Name: Archibald Hart

Age: 19

Weight: 86.1 KG

Height: 185.5 CM

Why do you want to join the MPF?:
I want to join the MPF because I am pretty decent when it comes to my build, merciless, and strong-willed. I weigh a decent amount and I am tall, so citizens will be intimidated by my height. My mercilessness comes from the fact that I am a Loyalist that thinks he can boss around citizens (Which may also be good. I am not afraid to admit the Loyalist thing.). My strong will comes from the Anti-citizens trying to make me one of them. I hope my abilities are at least adequate.

Also, I want to join the MPF because I am tired of citizens getting away with crimes. It makes me sick when I see citizens entering the Slums, threatening other citizens, and other ways they disrupt Civil Society. When not even the best Loyalists are around. The MPF needs new units to control them. I hope you accept me.

What do you hope to achieve in the MPF?:
I hope to achieve a better society in the MPF. I want to fix the Rebels and put them back in Civil Society. They know that they cannot win, and I want to prove it. I can be out on the field when most of the higher commanding officers are not around. They will not escape us.

Name 5 things a MPF unit does every day:

- Control the citizens
- Patrol the City
- Guard the Slums Checkpoint
- Discipline Criminals
- Investigate suspicious activity.

Character backstory:
I am Archibald Hart. I was transferred to this city one year ago. I was raised in City 15 as a potential Loyalist. In City 15, there was a rebel attack and I was possibly useful to the Combine, and that's why I'm here. I hoped to achieve a high rank when I saw a member of the Metro Police beating a rebel.

Today, I am a Loyalist and an artist. I draw Loyalist artwork, which is what first got me in here. I frequently report people going near the Slums checkpoint when there are no Metro Policemen around. I sort of take their place. The Metro Police Force is still my hero today.[left][justify][left]
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Post by rapzeh76 on Sat May 11, 2013 5:46 pm

+Support

Generally all round good application, great grammar, good understanding of the HL2 Lore, I want him on the MPF.

But, and there is always a but, make the backstory longer. I still +1 though cause of the rest of the great app.

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Post by Cypher on Sat May 11, 2013 6:14 pm

Captchas12 wrote:OOC:
How long have you been playing Sloth Gaming?: About 1 year.

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Post by SentimentalBadger on Sat May 11, 2013 9:20 pm

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Post by SentimentalBadger on Sat May 11, 2013 9:25 pm

Captchas12 wrote:OOC:
How long have you been playing Sloth Gaming?: About 1 year.



Why do you want to join the MPF?:
I have been playing Sloth Gaming for about 1 year, so it would make partial sense to apply.

Why does your character want to join the MPF?:

He will make a pretty good MPF.

Do you have any previous MPF experience?: No.



IC:
My mercilessness comes from the fact that I am a Loyalist that thinks he can boss around citizens (Which may also be good. I am not afraid to admit the Loyalist thing.).

when there are no Metro Policemen around. I sort of take their place.

-1.

All of these combined, I'd feel safer patrolling the slums with a 12 year old with down syndrome using crayons for bullets.
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Post by CookieMasterz on Sat May 11, 2013 10:08 pm

Why does your character want to join the MPF?:

He will make a pretty good MPF.


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Post by L30N on Sat May 11, 2013 10:34 pm

-Support
I honestly cannot be bothered pointing out everything wrong with it because, to be honest, there's nothing correct in the whole application.

Also, Rapzeh, how on earth do you think this app is "good all round"?

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Post by Sloth the Wizard on Sat May 11, 2013 10:39 pm

Captchas12 wrote:
How long have you been playing Sloth Gaming?: About 1 year.
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